The moths came just before Christmas:
dust-crumbling parchment specks
blowing in through opened doors
glowing on the television screen
flecks of life against the dark and light.
Then the storm took them.
I carry your sorrow through this time
in the cupped hands of my thoughts,
in spite of knowing that I can't
release it, whole, uncrushed, into the night,
or take even a moth's wing's weight of it away
from you.
14 comments:
Oh...
so very lovely, Lucy.
i'm very glad you got power back ...
and found marigolds in your unmown meadow!!
xoxo
The most beautiful expression of empathetic sorrowfulness I've ever read, Lucy.
This is the kind of beautiful thing that carries with it a heart-pain - it is a good thing, a very human communal thing. I'm not finding the right words. Thank you for sharing this, Lucy.
beautiful.
Beautiful and heart-rending.... seconding The Crow.
Photograph and poem are deeeply touching and utterly beautiful.
Very lovely.
As is the video by Colin and.. Li Yi? And the cat pictures! Happy Christmas time.
I am so touched by what I am reading here, Lucy, that I can't find appropriate words to say more.
Something beautiful happened to you. Will we ever know how far it travels and who is chosen to receive it - the generous fragrance of a last breath.
Thanks dears.
I was reluctant to dedicate it, but, y'know.
so lovely
That is beautiful indeed.
Exquisite!
This does exactly what poetry is meant to do, Lucy. The metaphor is perfect and the treatment beautiful.
Good closure to the year--and may next one be a glad one, Lucy!
Thanks again.
The poem is for a very dear friend indeed who has just lately lost his dear life partner.
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