Thanks all. It is a pretty spot. The day before all the land around it was underwater, it was still squelchy and silted. Lee - I wasn't sure about 'noise' but decided it was right, as it made me think rather of white noise. Avus - no, thirty it is. I can't pare the existing lines back any more to fit another one in within the 30, so it will have to stay incomplete. That's rationing for you.
I am appreciating the editorial input with this experiment; people seem more inclined to get involved!
the mill-race raced but the wheel was still.
A gorgeous spot as well as photos!!
ReplyDeleteTime moves on, the river flows.
ReplyDeletelucy!
ReplyDeletethese photographs are gorgeous!!
These photos are wonderful!
ReplyDeleteso French, with the steep roofs. A lot of water thereabouts - we're having that here now!
ReplyDeleteThis is just beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI miss living in the country!
More than 'noise'! That's music!
ReplyDeleteI know it's "thirty words" stuff - but, Lucy, those three lines are crying out for the fourth to make the quatrain!
ReplyDeleteThanks all. It is a pretty spot. The day before all the land around it was underwater, it was still squelchy and silted.
ReplyDeleteLee - I wasn't sure about 'noise' but decided it was right, as it made me think rather of white noise.
Avus - no, thirty it is. I can't pare the existing lines back any more to fit another one in within the 30, so it will have to stay incomplete. That's rationing for you.
I am appreciating the editorial input with this experiment; people seem more inclined to get involved!
Such a lovely countryside you have to enjoy, Lucy! Words are not necessary except perhaps as brief captions.
ReplyDeleteWe'll see this in May and June.
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